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You are not the kind of boy
who should be marrying the wrong girl
and I'm afraid I am exactly what you
should not have.

You want someone who you can
take to the bar every night of the week,
who will condone your workaholic nature,
who will never force you into the marriage
corner; someone who you can stand
for long periods of time but once six months
comes around you can ask to leave your apartment
and she won't put up a fuss. She'll pack up
and leave you to find another girl who will
mold into the place she left behind in your sheets.

I am not the kind of girl
who will wait around till she's forty
for you to be ready for commitment.
I am not the girl who will party with the
best of them because, you know something,
I don't like the taste of beer and I'd rather
run my fingers over the page of a good book
than feel my hand slip as I try to get a grip
of the bottle. I am not the girl who will
stand by and watch up without question.
I am going to make you think and I am
going to back you into corners because
I am caged myself and maybe being
trapped with a partner would be better.
I will not fit the mold your girls leave beneath
your comforter. I will make my own, and
no matter how many you bring home to
get rid of it, you'll never lose the patterns I left.

So when I kiss you in the parking lot,
when it's dark and the air is crisp with
the tension of lost souls and stagnant hearts,
it is not because I want you to love me.
What I want from you is more basic than that.

I want to feel again. But your lips are
dead and cold like the icicles that cling to my breath
and I know now that you would kill my soul,
turn me into something like you, and I'm sorry
but I am not the kind of girl who should marry
the wrong boy and that is exactly what you are.

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:iconhoyhen:
I love how the start and the end link. It feels like a sort of closure. And after I read it, I thought, would you even still want to be friends with that sort of person? Haha. For love though, one would deserve better.
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~ravenwritingclaw Jan 26, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you! For me, yeah I do want to be friends with him because he is a good person, we just don't connect on important levels concerning a romantic relationship. Thanks for the :+fav: by the way!
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:iconhoyhen:
No problem haha, and sorry I assumed that he was a bad person. Nevertheless, all the best to you!
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~ravenwritingclaw Jan 26, 2013  Professional Writer
It's okay. He's not a bad person because he doesn't want a committed relationship, he's just a bad person for me, you know? Thanks!
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:iconhoyhen:
I see what you mean :)
and np ^^
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`dreamsinstatic Jan 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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~ravenwritingclaw Jan 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you so much :glomp:
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:iconmarqueza:
I like your comment in the description. It's...precise...and kind of funny, but funny isn't the right word and I can't think of the right one so funny will have to do. ;)
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~ravenwritingclaw Jan 3, 2013  Professional Writer
lol I'm glad you like it :heart:
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:iconwhennightmareswalked:
Oh goodness. I love how that ended, circling back to the way it started, only it's him who is wrong and not you. And that's lovely.
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